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Based on a True Story?

Were any of the characters in Through the Mist: Restoration based on real people? Well, not exactly.

The villain, Richard MacDonald, was based on the spirit of someone I know. The character does not bear a strong physical resemblance, but his attitude  is very similar to this particular person’s personality (or lack thereof).

His sister Cairen embodies the spirit of two people I have encountered in the last several years. They were as deceitful as she is. It was fun to write the character with those women in mind.

One character is solidly based on reality: the little white dog in the stable. My dog has missed quite a few belly rubs and had more than a few walkies delayed because of my writing. She deserved a mention in the book. She may pop up again in the sequel – you never know!

When she was surrendered to a nearby shelter, she had baggage: her two puppies. They had been adopted, leaving my sweet G at the shelter. She is the sweetest dog who has brought so much joy into our lives. She is feisty, intelligent, and fun.

Speaking of fun, I must mention the horse, Angel. The real Angel was not a horse. She was our next door neighbors’ dog, who appeared one night outside their house. She was a small white puppy, soaking wet and cold.

She annoyed my dog with her constant desire to play. She always wanted to lick G’s eyebrows and whiskers. Every morning, she would sneak up to our house and wait outside the basement door. She knew when G took her morning walkie and wanted to join us. When she died unexpectedly last April, she left a huge void. For months afterward, G would climb the steps at the neighbors’ house and look for Angel.

Writing has given me the opportunity to have a good laugh while I satirized people I hate. On a far more positive note, I have also enjoyed capturing the sweetness of two wonderful dogs. I hope you have fun on this journey with me.

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Benjamin Campbell: Character Insight

When I began writing Through the Mist: Restoration, I wanted the story to have a different spin than the usual time travel novel. (No offense to that type of book.) I wanted my story to be different.

Typically, the male protagonist is a dashing laird who fought for the Jacobite cause. He is a fine Scottish hero, more fantasy than reality. The heroine resists his charms but eventually succumbs to his strong...ahem...personality.

Yeah….no.

For starters, my book is set in 1801. The Jacobite rebellion had long passed, and the title of “laird” would not have been used. The clan system was essentially destroyed after the ’45 Rising. Times were very, very different.

Then, I wanted the character to be a Campbell. That particular clan is quite notorious. In the infamous ’45, they sided with the British and fought at Culloden. To borrow from Outlander, the Campbells would have tried to kill our beloved Jamie. So, how do you craft a hero from someone who did not come from the traditional Scottish hero’s ancestry?

I decided that Benjamin should be the second son. In my research, I discovered that the first son inherited everything. Any progeny that followed would have been left to his/her own devices. In the book, Benjamin alludes to his original plan to become a soldier, a common profession for second sons.

His father Malcolm is a ruthless man. He pinned all his hopes on the first son, Allan, so Benjamin grew up with the MacIvers. Robert MacIver is the Campbell estate’s factor; his son Iain is Benjamin’s best friend and will one day become the estate’s factor, just like his dad.

Benjamin spent more time among “the common folk,” as his father would have called them, and did not have any pretensions about his stature in the family. When he is finally thrust into a powerful role, he feels compassion for and camaraderie with people who attempt to scrape out a meager existence. He does not have his father’s greedy ways. As a man who had a simple upbringing, he can feel shame and remorse for the actions of his grandfather and father. He too has own sins. (In a very moving scene, he reveals them to Tilly.)

His humility serves him well when he interacts with Tilly. As someone with a dark past, he does not judge her as harshly as others might. He does not have the formality that one would expect from men in that time. To put it simply, he was not “raised that way.”

He also does not take the traditional role of protector. In many books, the hero rushes in at the critical moment and saves the damsel in distress. That does not happen in my book. Tilly is a strong woman. She takes action; she is the hero.

In the next book, we will continue to explore Benjamin’s character. We already know that a lot of tension exists between Benjamin and his father. What will Malcolm think when he learns that Benjamin has settled his affections on someone who may not be “the best prospect” for a marriage? What could the man really do? And, most importantly, why doesn’t Benjamin tell him to go to hell? Come on, dude – you love Tilly. Stand up for her!

As you can see, I spent a lot of time crafting the story behind this character. I needed all of this detail in order to understand his motivations and actions. If you have any questions about Benjamin or any other characters/scenes/et cetera, please leave a comment. I would love to hear your thoughts. 

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